Blog post #10 Script

In creative writing we we assigned to make up a story and then write a well though out script . We first had to make a story board make sure we new what to do for our script. The script should show character development and tell a story through words from the characters.  My script is below

Script:

Ext, house, day

Three man and two women are talking in a suburban house

 

ADAM MADISON

Ok we are planning to rob the Wells Fargo bank in New York

 

LEAN MADISON

But, what about mom she is still serving

 

SEAN MADISON

No, she out but we need to find her she is important to have in this robbery

 

ADAM MADISON

Yeah, I think I know where she is

LEAN

The HTY house right

Adam

Yes

Ext. Car. Night

The brothers and sisters are at the HTY house

 

MOM MADISON

What do you guess want?

 

Adam Madison

We need your help in a robbery, it’s in New York and it’s… Wells Fargo

 

MOM

There ant no why I am going there and we both know why (Dad works there)

 

ADAM

You are the best in the business please

 

MOM

Ok but just this time and I get 15% of the earnings if you get it (signing)

 

ADAM

Deal, we get up at 6 o’clock sharp

 

MOM

Ok! (Smiling)

Int. Bank. Night

The family is in a white car parked 2 blocks from the bank

 

ADAM

Here’s the plan first mom takes down the camera then we move in and knock the guards out, everyone good

Lean

Wait what if there is no money in the bank or we can’t hack the computer or…

 

ADAM

Stop, its ok we have been over this and nowhere every single camera and guard is

 

SEAN

Ok so I will go in from the left and Adam will go in from the back and lean will go through the front to shut the alarm systems off

Ext. Bank. Night

All the family is entering the bank and the mom is in a white van outside, it is 11:02

ADAM

Wait there’s something wrong there is more cameras, everyone gets out now!!! (Yelling)

 

Adam

We will try again tomorrow

Ext. house. Day

 

LEAN

That was close I told you that something was going to happen (Frown)

 

ADAM

Ok Ok you were right but just be lucky I got you out (Smiling)

 

MOM

Ok you have about 5 seconds to tell me what the heck just happened (angary)

 

ADAM

Mom its ok we are heading back tomorrow

 

MOM

Ok but now I get 25% of the earnings for the delay

 

LEAN

No 20%

 

ADAM

Guys lets just try to get the money first

 

MOM and LEAN

OK!

Ext. bank. Night

The day of the second try to rob the Wells Fargo bank

 

MOM

Everyone mic work

SEAN, ADAM and LEAN

CHECK!

 

ADAM

Same plan

 

Lean and Sean

Good to go

 

Entering the bank and then lean goes left instead of right

 

MOM

Lean wrong way

 

ADAM and SEAN

Lean get out of there now

 

No words spoke over the mic for 10 seconds

 

Lean

 

AHHHHHHHHHHH Help Help Hel… (Coming over the mic)

 

ADAM

Mom is there anyone outside…

 

SEAN

MOM, MOM (yelling)

 

Police are outside waiting for the group

 

ADAM

Sean there is something weird going on

 

SEAN

ADAM ADAM there are police outside

ADAM

Crap, what do we do

 

SEAN

Ad.. adam, ge, out of ther (getting attacked by police)

 

ADAM

(BANG BANG BANG)

 

After a long 10 minutes of Adam waiting the police confront him and shot him down, the rest of the FF all go to jail for charges on

  • Armed Robbery
  • Robbery
  • Assaults
  • Murder

 

Mom gets 7 years in prison

Lean gets 2 years in prison

Sean gets 2 life sentences

If Adam did live he would get 56 years in prison

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